Hi Lily! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. Awesome work! I like the way that your labels were clear and you could see exactly where they were pointing to and what the name was.
I didn't know that the organs of a squid was way up there! it's interesting how much of its body probably is stuck in the pointed bit at the top. Why do you think the eyes are to its side?
To improve, maybe you could add in some more facts, or add a bit of colour to your post.
Kia Ora Mia i'm glad that you commented on my post! It is so interesting that all of the squids organs are in the top of its head the mantle. Thank you for the awesome feedback. Kind Regards -Lily
Hi Lily! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. Awesome work! I like the way that your labels were clear and you could see exactly where they were pointing to and what the name was.
ReplyDeleteI didn't know that the organs of a squid was way up there! it's interesting how much of its body probably is stuck in the pointed bit at the top. Why do you think the eyes are to its side?
To improve, maybe you could add in some more facts, or add a bit of colour to your post.
Overall, great work!
Mia
Kia Ora Mia i'm glad that you commented on my post!
DeleteIt is so interesting that all of the squids organs are in the top of its head the mantle.
Thank you for the awesome feedback.
Kind Regards
-Lily