| W.A.L.T Write descriptive sentences. This week in Mamaku 2 we had to write a story and use a picture to write about. This was the picture that Mrs P gave us. It is a little girl taking a giraffe for a walk. In the story we had to describe what the giraffe looked like and where the little girl was taking the giraffe. I enjoyed this activity and think that I included some good description. My next step learning goal for writing is to organise my ideas into paragraphs. |
Friday 31 August 2018
Giraffe Writing
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Hello Lily,
ReplyDeleteI'm Sam from Totara 3. I think this story was really descriptive but you might want to work on your grammar. I like the colours you have used but you need to make the text bigger so that people could read it. I remember doing descriptive writing at the start of the year.
Yours Sincerely
Sam