For this activity we had to Choose a simple sentence out of Alana stood on the step,I waited for the bus or I got a call for 5 minutes and I choose to do the sentence I waited for the bus.Also for this activity we had to add in one sentence/word for each new line.Every time that we add something new in we have to start another sentence and write more things.We had to write a adjective,when,where,how and why. Here is my explanation
Friday 29 March 2019
I waited for the Bus
WALT:Add Detail to our sentences to give detail to the reader.
For this activity we had to Choose a simple sentence out of Alana stood on the step,I waited for the bus or I got a call for 5 minutes and I choose to do the sentence I waited for the bus.Also for this activity we had to add in one sentence/word for each new line.Every time that we add something new in we have to start another sentence and write more things.We had to write a adjective,when,where,how and why. Here is my explanation
For this activity we had to Choose a simple sentence out of Alana stood on the step,I waited for the bus or I got a call for 5 minutes and I choose to do the sentence I waited for the bus.Also for this activity we had to add in one sentence/word for each new line.Every time that we add something new in we have to start another sentence and write more things.We had to write a adjective,when,where,how and why. Here is my explanation
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Hi , Lily
ReplyDelete, Kyah here from your class!
Wow i love the colours and your sentences!
Its clear , and big enough for me to read!! ,
I have a few questions What is your favourite sentence and what did you like about this activity?!
Keep up the good work!
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Kyah!
Hi Kyah its Lily My favourite sentence is the why sentence because that is the sentence with the most detail and I liked everything about this activity but the thing that I liked the most was the fact that I learned so much from this activity because I didn't know that you can get so much detail out of one little simple sentence.Thank you so much for your lovely comment. from Lily
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