Wednesday 15 April 2020

Hide and Seek poem

I have been creating my own hide and seek poem.A hide and seek poem is a poem that you write about hide and seek and it dosnt have to rhyme but you want it to be very detailed and discriptive. This is my poem I hope you enjoy.

2 comments:

  1. hello Lilly billie here from t3. I really really loved your poem it felt like i was there with you hiding behind the cranberry tree.One thing you could maybe do in the future is add a little more colours but honestly thats something that dose not really matters.
    Good job:)
    yours truly.
    Billie.

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  2. Hi Lilly
    What a great poem. I could smell the sweetness of the cranberries with your chosen words.

    Hope you are all safe in your family bubble.

    Tineka

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.