Hello Lily! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. Awesome work! I really liked the facts that you added in, they were interesting and the pictures made it even more eye catching.
The Eiffel tower is quite impressive! It lights up and night and looks spectacular from a distance. If I get the chance, I would like to go to Paris and actually see the Eiffel tower. Have you been to France? Or Paris?
To improve, maybe you could make the text white so that way it stands out more and is easier to read.
Hello Lily! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. Awesome work! I really liked the facts that you added in, they were interesting and the pictures made it even more eye catching.
ReplyDeleteThe Eiffel tower is quite impressive! It lights up and night and looks spectacular from a distance. If I get the chance, I would like to go to Paris and actually see the Eiffel tower. Have you been to France? Or Paris?
To improve, maybe you could make the text white so that way it stands out more and is easier to read.
Great effort!
Mia