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The Clear Wet water in the fountain at 10am today makes waves as the bubble splashes when it drops “it looks Satisfying” and it feels cold as I dip my finger in.
The Clear Wet Shallow water in the fountain at 10am today makes small waves as the little bubble splashes when it drops “It looks Satisfying when I look at it” and it feels cold as I dip my finger into the cold water.
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